Can you give me honest opinion abou the new song?

Can you give me honest opinion abou the new song?
What you think about it?

https://soundcloud.com/godenword/u-1


I am not sure what is going on

That was painful to listen to.  There is no song structure.  What percussion being used isn't in time with the song as there is, as I said, no structure.  The spoken word parts are unintelligible.

I would definitely go back to the drawing board and try to connect some of the dots before releasing this.

What can you say about another older song?
https://youtu.be/DG8eV_wQ308

alldatndensum wrote:That was painful to listen to.  There is no song structure.  What percussion being used isn't in time with the song as there is, as I said, no structure.  The spoken word parts are unintelligible.

I would definitely go back to the drawing board and try to connect some of the dots before releasing this.

I do not like how modern music is made. I want something differnt

Sasha777 wrote:What can you say about another older song?
https://youtu.be/DG8eV_wQ308

Again, there was no structure whatsoever of what I listened to.  It comes off as noise.

I'm not trying to insult you, but are you playing in the "drone metal" subgenre? That's what it sounds like to be perfectly honest.