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Post by Guest on Mon Apr 16, 2012 5:47 pm

just would like to know what you all think:

Body of Christ
God is Sick

these are a couple of tracks I recorded in Aug. No bass atm.

I have a couple more that I recorded in Aug but I have to rewrite/rerecord the vocals for them... as well as a few more that I'm in the process of writing/recording.

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just "finished" another one.. though you must first pardon the fact that my timing is a little off on the stop/start.. and the lack of a guitar solo... I have, thus far, been unsuccessful at writing one for this song... if someone wants to give me some ideas or somethin.. more than welcome. And yes, I left the coke can opening for no reason.. maybe I should put it as the intro.. hmm...

i am not

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here's one of the other songs I did back in August. All I did was take the old vocal track off and put a new one of me reading Isaiah 53.

Isaiah

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another song I wrote years ago that I pulled out of the shelf and put to some drum loops. Don't think I'm gonna add vocals but I certainly would like to add some instrumentation (including violin) to the clean guitar parts...

Moral Decay

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here's another one I did back in August. All I did was take the old vocal track off and put a new one of some the "blessed" statements in Psalms (and in Matthew at end)

blessed art


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Post by Driven on Tue Apr 17, 2012 7:23 am

I can do bass for ya. That sounds pretty cool Smile
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Post by BloodyReaper213 on Thu Apr 19, 2012 9:09 pm

Dude, I'm liking this! You like War of Ages? For some reason this reminds me of them xD We gotta brainstorm sometime! Want any lyrics and help me write a song?

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Post by Guest on Fri Apr 20, 2012 9:59 am

never heard of them. I'll look them up.

I can work with ya if you like.

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Post by Driven on Fri Apr 20, 2012 4:15 pm

Is I AM NOT in 6/4 or something?
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Post by Guest on Fri Apr 20, 2012 4:39 pm

didn't pay attention to that.. I just stuck a second break in between the drum loops and went to town lol ....

when I do a better version of the song I might change it a little. It's really a challenge to do songs with drum loops... would be so much easier if I had someone playin' to write with.. but at least the drum loops force me to stay in time as I have to work at that.

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Post by BloodyReaper213 on Fri Apr 20, 2012 4:43 pm

Yeah, that'd be awesome. I have quite a few riffs from just jamming out and letting God give me inspiration. I use a lot of power cords and the riffs are sweet and heavy/brutal.

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Post by Guest on Fri Apr 20, 2012 4:50 pm

i am not is one of the songs I wrote years ago... I'm now revisiting the guitar-only demos of them I made years ago and putting them together with some drum loops, etc... and doing some vocals...

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Post by Guest on Fri Apr 20, 2012 4:52 pm

BloodyReaper213 wrote:Yeah, that'd be awesome. I have quite a few riffs from just jamming out and letting God give me inspiration. I use a lot of power cords and the riffs are sweet and heavy/brutal.

wouldn't mind hearin' some of 'em.

btw I don't like your avatar. Smile

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Post by BloodyReaper213 on Fri Apr 20, 2012 4:53 pm

Oh, ok. Honestly, I don't care for spoken vocals, but in your songs they work Razz I think that if we work together, we can just make instrumental songs and then someone can do vocals later. Since danielbandfan is interested in playing bass, he could be a bassist in the project.

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Post by BloodyReaper213 on Fri Apr 20, 2012 4:53 pm

unworthy wrote:
BloodyReaper213 wrote:Yeah, that'd be awesome. I have quite a few riffs from just jamming out and letting God give me inspiration. I use a lot of power cords and the riffs are sweet and heavy/brutal.

wouldn't mind hearin' some of 'em.

btw I don't like your avatar. Smile
Whaaaaaaaat? What's wrong with it? Sad

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Post by Guest on Fri Apr 20, 2012 4:56 pm

well... it borders a little too close of being sacrilegious and making light of the sacrifice of Christ... my opinion anyway. Smile

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Post by BloodyReaper213 on Fri Apr 20, 2012 4:57 pm

Dang... you're like the 2nd or 3rd person to say that Sad I guess I don't understand how offensive it is. Sorry.

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Post by Guest on Fri Apr 20, 2012 4:59 pm

some songs work better than others at spoken vocals... I've always liked heavy songs with spoken vocals.. some of them anyway.. like the spoken vocals on Believer's Dimensia ..

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Post by Guest on Fri Apr 20, 2012 5:01 pm

danielbandfan wrote:Is I AM NOT in 6/4 or something?

if I would have done it with time signature in mind it might actually have been a lot easier with the stop/start then it was lol

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Post by Guest on Fri Apr 20, 2012 11:37 pm

another song with spoken vocals I love: Sweating Bullets by Megadeth.

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Post by Guest on Sat Apr 21, 2012 12:14 pm

just as a side note: I used Audacity to record all of these and I have them saved as audacity project files.. which means I can add/remove/adjust any particular instrument/part of the file. If anyone has comments/suggestions on ways to improve the sound of the files or anything please let me know as I'm not all that knowledgeable. Smile

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Post by BloodyReaper213 on Sat Apr 21, 2012 12:36 pm

I got nothing to record with so I guess I'll have to try and give tabs and then we'll do trial and error with you attempting to do them...? :\

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Post by Guest on Sat Apr 21, 2012 1:07 pm

I don't have anything myself.. just got an adapter (upgraded to a plug recently) and just plug my guitar into the "line in" (or mic spot will work to but lower quality) on the back of my computer. Audacity (or similar program) is freeware.

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Post by BloodyReaper213 on Sat Apr 21, 2012 1:56 pm

Oh.. Hmmm

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Post by Driven on Sat Apr 21, 2012 8:34 pm

Will you not take me up on the offer of playing bass? Razz
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Post by BloodyReaper213 on Sat Apr 21, 2012 9:57 pm

I will! ;D lol

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Post by Guest on Sun Apr 22, 2012 7:00 am

what program do you use dbf?

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Post by Driven on Sun Apr 22, 2012 7:27 am

I use GarageBand.
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Post by Guest on Sun Apr 22, 2012 7:40 am

then my Audacity files wouldn't do ya any good... you need wav files? what formats can you export files to?

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Post by Driven on Sun Apr 22, 2012 7:41 am

I can export to AAC, M4A and MP3.
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Post by Guest on Sun Apr 22, 2012 7:44 am

I should be able to import any of those into Audacity.

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Post by Driven on Sun Apr 22, 2012 2:15 pm

I'm installing Audacity right now.
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Post by Through The Dark Radio on Mon Apr 23, 2012 9:41 am

Such Audacity Razz
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Post by Guest on Mon Apr 23, 2012 4:52 pm

audacity is pretty much the only program that I've used ... and I haven't had any issues with it.

let me know what you need dbf and I'll upload 'em to whichever of the file sharing services that still work lol

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Post by Guest on Wed Apr 25, 2012 9:07 pm

workin' on some lyrics.. so much fun lol

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Post by Through The Dark Radio on Wed Apr 25, 2012 9:45 pm

OK, finally got a chance to listen to some of the songs. I like most of what you got here. The guitar part in the middle of Body of Christ is a bit repetitive. If it didn't stay that way for as long as it does, it'd be an amazing song.
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Post by Guest on Thu Apr 26, 2012 8:04 am

thanks.

that's what so wonderful about demos is.. they're meant to both showcase/improve the song and they are completely changeable lol

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Post by Guest on Mon Apr 30, 2012 11:41 am

dbf you get Audacity workin' for ya? what do you think?

if you want to cut some bass tracks for some of these and need some .aup files for them lemme know... I can also remove certain tracks (say vocals) from them as well... I can upload 'em for ya and send you the link.

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Post by Driven on Mon Apr 30, 2012 3:20 pm

Yeah, um… if you can turn the vocals down a bit and send me .aup's, I'd be happy. I can't say that I'm used to Audacity yet though; I need to get some practice in. Razz
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Post by Driven on Sat May 05, 2012 3:04 pm

I tracked Body Of Christ today, after only two listens. It needs work though Razz
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Post by Camerone007 on Fri Apr 12, 2013 2:15 pm

Here is too difficult for me to write whole playlist of my songs. Actually there are too many songs which is liked by me. But "Heart attack" is the most favorite song of mine before it i was love to play "Do not stop the music" by Rihanna. Anyway here is also a good collection.

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