Quest For Homesick Medicine

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Quest For Homesick Medicine

Post by rfw1994 on Mon Apr 16, 2012 4:10 am

Hey
guys, me and a friend are working on writing some songs, and this is
one of the first results. It's pretty raw, but some feedback would be
appreciated. http://soundcloud.com/boom2/homeroom

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Re: Quest For Homesick Medicine

Post by Shepherd on Mon Apr 16, 2012 4:31 pm

This is pretty cool dude. It's got a laid back feel but with a little edge. It's like Pink Floyd with a touch of Sabbath....Good sound! You've got a good thing going here. It's got a jam feel to it which is good and bad for me. It's easy listening but lacks focus. I think you do a good job of balancing the two and works well for this particular song. However, if it was a whole albums worth of the same I think it would lose me.

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Re: Quest For Homesick Medicine

Post by Guest on Mon Apr 16, 2012 4:56 pm

a nice sound.. but to me it sounds too much like you took two songs with different sounds and tried to smash them together.. once you hit about the 2 minute mark.. you kind of lost me Smile It sounds good but, to me, it doesn't feel like it really belongs together like it could... perhaps if you repeated some of the earlier rhythm later in the song it might balance it out more.

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Re: Quest For Homesick Medicine

Post by rfw1994 on Tue Apr 17, 2012 2:47 am

Shepherd wrote:This is pretty cool dude. It's got a laid back feel but with a little edge. It's like Pink Floyd with a touch of Sabbath....Good sound! You've got a good thing going here. It's got a jam feel to it which is good and bad for me. It's easy listening but lacks focus. I think you do a good job of balancing the two and works well for this particular song. However, if it was a whole albums worth of the same I think it would lose me.


unworthy wrote:a nice sound.. but to me it sounds too much like you took two songs with different sounds and tried to smash them together.. once you hit about the 2 minute mark.. you kind of lost me Smile It sounds good but, to me, it doesn't feel like it really belongs together like it could... perhaps if you repeated some of the earlier rhythm later in the song it might balance it out more.


Two great pieces of advice, thanks guys. I greatly appreciate it.

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Re: Quest For Homesick Medicine

Post by rfw1994 on Sun May 13, 2012 2:43 pm

I made another song, and I'll post it here, just to keep the amount of topics down:

http://soundcloud.com/thrashglam/albatroz

The style is minimalistic, so don't judge on technicality please Smile

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